Oh-star review

First impressions
Woo! Very striking however it is Spring and usually spring is accosiated with bright and happy colours and your hompage seems to be lacking it that context. I know your probably thinking all you do is sit on a computer and the world wide web cant tell so whats the point? Well i think it does matter so when the happy seasons come try and make people happy by using pastel or bright colours :D Also another thing i picked up on was that the girl in the layout is smoking and looking kind of drugged up, i dont know if you noticed but i thought i should let you know since this could be setting a bad example. Perhaps you did know and are trying to promote smoking as a good thing? Probably not but this could be assumed since the layout slogan is "Oh, how beautiful".
Moving on i like your css but i struggled to find your navigation, i scrolled down thurther and found it but i was puzzled as to why it was underneath you profile and you find me bit. You should always remember that the navigation bit is one of the most important parts of your site. Your profile bit is really just a part that people can read if they get bored. However i did find it so moving on..
Content
Webmistress
Well i see lots of information but i would of liked to see more of a autobiography paragraph instead of just facts after facts, its always nice to see what people say and think about themselves. I cannot complain though since theres a whole page i have picked out some facts that i would like to comment on.
You like golden retrievers well i also like retrievers since i have a flat coated retriever i know its not a golden retriever but they are pretty simular.
You like the word potato Well i have a confession to make all my life have had this problem with the word pudding
You have read chinese cinderella I have also read chinese cinderella! I found it quite hard to cope with but in the end it turned out to be a really great book.

Visitor
First of all i just wanted to say that your rules are quite hard to read and i dont think its me going blind either maybe just go up a size on the font since some visitors might not have that good a sight.
Now where was i.. colour pallets.. Ohh i like i really like the second one on the first row. You could do with some more but i think they are good and could come in really handy for people with no taste.
Icon textures Wow the last two are really nice and are quite unique however i didnt like the first ones since anyone can make them on photoshop. I liked them overall but i thought you could use more than just 3 sets.
Brushes Wow i like! They're really good some of them you have spent a lot of time on and other you have made in photoshop but they are kinda cool, But you can only use them in photoshop 8.0 and above thats kinda annoying since i use 7.0 but oh well i guess people will just have to use image packs however annoying they are. The rest of the downloads i will leave.
Graphics Wooh only blend bases? Wheres all the icons, layouts, etc? I like to see that your helping people who only have ms paint but however maybe you should give them some effects, font, brushes and include your site name so that ms paint users can use them as their homepage layout this might be a better idea.

And now on to Tutorials well you only have three but thats a start a suppose, now looking at the tutorials they are good but they must take you ages since you include so many screen shots maybe just use words to explain it just to save you time.

Site
When i first click on your credits floating either side of your layout, i dont think this is mean't to be like that but i apologize if it is. I'm glad you have credited sites but theres not many, where did you get your pictures from of the girl in the blend? Where do you get your fonts from? Try to include sites like this. Now i see another box of information called credits i assume you mean't background information since thats what its all about. This is quite nice reading about how you started off and all you've included lots of info so if someone is bored they can come along and read it. Behind the name
Its not the longest explanation in the world but it does the job short and snappy - just how i like it.

Overall Overall i like your site although it needs more content and to be taken out of the gloomy darkness. Brighten it up a bit and add some more content, get some more graphics and let your visitors leave feeling that this was a really good site.

I give your site 3 stars ***

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